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Wednesday 30 March 2016

Bubbles Writing



           Use lots of WOW words to describe the bubbles

Attempt 1.//// The bubble taste  like RAINBOWS in my mouth.Cold  bubbles. Werti bubbles.pop pop the bubble said.bom bom  the bubble said. I saw diamonds in the sky. Bouts in the sky.100 moons in the day.I could see my future.  
Attempt 2//// The bubble taste  like big RAINBOWS in my mouth.Cold   big bubbles. Big water bubbles on my head.Pop pop the big bubble said.Bom bom  the bubble said. I saw a diamonds in the sky. Bolts in the sky.100 moons in the day.I could see my future.  

Attempt 3.//// The bubbles tasted  like big RAINBOWS in my mouth.Cold big bubbles. Big water bubbles on my head.Pop ,pop,pop the big bubbles said. Boom, boom  the bubbles said. I saw diamonds in the sky. They were like bolts in the sky. 





First we played outside with bubbles. Next we watched the bubbles in slow motion and how they popped.  We brainstormed lots of words.My words were - The bubbles tasted like rainbows in my mouth. The bubbles looked like diamonds in the sky. Then we described the bubbles. 
I have learnt what a simile and an adjective is.

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